Thursday, January 2, 2014

Eternal Ever After Excerpt, Review & Giveaway!

Eternal Ever After
Ever After Series Book 1
A.C. James

Genre: Erotic Paranormal Romance

Publisher: Wandering Impulse Press

Date of Publication: 11/23/13

E-Book: 978-0-9911485-0-9
Print: 978-0-9911485-1-6

Number of pages: 307
Word Count: 88K

Cover Artist: Ramona Lockwood

Book Description:

His past holds a secret…

Arie Cush has a secret that he thought he’d left behind. When his past follows him to Chicago he must protect someone that reminds him of all the painful memories he’s tried so hard to forget. But when every touch from her sets his heart and body on fire—he finds it hard to maintain his aloof fa├žade.

That becomes her nightmare.

Holly Ellis has secrets of her own. An encounter with the handsome stranger who frequents her coffee shop reveals a vampire with baggage. Even though it might be more than she bargained for, she can’t resist the one person who understands her. But her life is in danger and a supernatural threat could reveal the underground world of vampires to humankind in this Gothic Cinderella re-telling.

Inside Scoop: This story contains bondage, anal play, a M/F primary romance with mild F/F situations.

Warning: This book is fictitious. The bdsm portrayed in this story does not portray the lifestyle. Vampires will be vampires. They don’t exactly stop to discuss a scene, pain thresholds, and there is no aftercare involved. Trust is an intrinsic part of the lifestyle. Use due diligence and research before deciding to make fiction into reality.

Heat Level: This book is a steamy romance. It’s the development of a romantic relationship that contains more explicit language and sex. The sex is not an inherent part of the story, character growth, or relationship development, and if removed you still have an amazing plot.


“If your enemy is hungry, feed him; if he is thirsty, give him something to drink.”
–Holy Bible: King James Version


          I never guessed that I could die with a sea of faces surrounding me, all cheering for my death. A woman wearing a jacket dress made of brocade only laughed louder when blood splattered the low square neckline. Where is Arie? I scanned the crowded club but all I could see were pale faces, some half covered by masks.
          My time had come and I prayed she would finish me off quickly. The warm trickle of blood ran down my neck and chest, saturating the corset bustier of my gown. It seemed like a shame to ruin such a pretty dress. Strangely, I felt relieved the bodice was black and not a light color that would show a stain.
          The fear of dying or more accurately, the fear of not existing, scared me stiff. Perhaps if I had satisfied this existential anxiety with faith I wouldn’t jump from panic to ambivalence. I should be angry at everyone who simply watched. They must think the gruesome display is part of the entertainment for tonight. After the bloody burlesque show I could hardly blame them.
          Holly, I gave you the chance to leave. The telepathic transference hardly seemed relevant at this point. I knew if I’d never gone to the Hellfire Club, I wouldn’t be facing death now. Still, if my death meant the killings would stop it seemed justifiable.
          “No!” I could barely hear Arie scream above the cheering voices clamoring for attention. The constant drone defies my effort to form coherent thoughts. I looked up and could see him on the balcony. When I blinked he had disappeared into the throng. I could feel the blood continue to trickle down my neck as she drained me. Dizziness threatened to pull me under. The audience applauded her brutality. I crumpled at her feet, looking up at her smile as thin as paper.
          Blood. So much blood. My blood.
          I didn’t want this to be the story of my death but this part is only a fragment of a narrative as old as time. Its voices fill the shadows with whispers of legend. We are told that the damned cease to exist and those absolved from sin are given eternal life. The damned can never be saved. They walk the earth in an eternal hell. I fear it will be my curse if death doesn’t claim me instead.

Eternal Ever After

by A.C. James 

Review by Daria
3 of 5

Two important points 1) vampires don’t sparkle... they dazzle and 2) even vampires have baggage. Arie an ancient vampire finds a human girl that intrigues him. Holly a human girl plus a little more, she can see things that others can’t. She works in a coffee shop and that’s the beginning of where her life changes.

Arie has the yo-yo effect personality, he comes on to holly but says he's bad and she should push him away. He's all up on her, buys her things, has her in his bed.. but again and again tells her how dangerous he is that SHE needs to walk away.

Holly has been through so much I mean foster homes, people afraid of her and thinking she is a freak. Meeting Arie, she constantly shows her bitchy side.

They both seem to be fighting each other. He emotionally turns Holly to the side and Holly keeps coming back. Not only does Arie's past comes to the present, so does Holly's.

If you take away all the back and forth leave me, please stay, I need you.  The story line isn’t bad and the danger element was fun to read, ( I think they allowed Katarina too much time to wreak havoc). A sweet love story, the characters weren’t that strong, neither Arie or Holly ( I did like Tess). The sex scenes were pretty good, even without the bits of BDSM.

The way I interpreted that both Arie and Holly set me off the story, for me they just lacked backbone. It was a very long story to get to the meat of the plot. It wasn’t “bad” read, though with the whole flow of the book, the ending made me want to smack someone. So try it and enjoy it. I am interested in seeing others reviews.

This book was provided free of charge as part of the tour for an honest review.

About the Author:

A.C. James—author of erotic paranormal romance and erotica featuring bdsm. Wife, mother, sushi lover, and storyteller extraordinaire. She resides in northeast Pennsylvania drinking large vats of coffee while taming two toddlers by day and writing by night. 



  1. Thanks for having me on the blog and I appreciate the honest review :) Good, bad, or in between reviews are really important to us indies and I'd love if you could post this review on Amazon too: If not, no biggie ;) But if you decide to I'd be happy to send you either the prequel Cursed Ever After which has more of Tessa or Winter Promises as a gift copy to thank you for taking the time to review. Take care and Happy New Year!

    1. Thanks for appearing on Share My Destiny. I will pass your offer on to Daria, the reviewer for this book. It sounds interesting. Keep writing and have a Fantastic New Year!